Got Dropped into a Ghost Story, Still Gotta Work - Chapter 4

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TheRPotato

1 month ago

What the hell do you mean paid the price in an intuitive way lmao, how is melting from tears or burning in gold intuitive. Most probably a mistranslation somewhere along the line. Also, considering it’s a destination does that imply that everyone who got off at serial killer station is now destined to be one? If you get off at peace are you destined for peace? On a tangent, how is he sure that no one in the wagon has been at peace before and no one will be punished? Unless I misinterpreted the rules, if one has felt said emotion before then they should be punished. Could be instead emotions felt in the moment instead of over your life, e.g. the previous guys felt ecstasy when running towards what they thought was the exit in ecstasy station.

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delheviah

2 months ago

We Got A Good MC, I Think He’s Cool :likee:

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Thalorwyn

2 months ago

People sure don’t like reading long sentences… :bruh:

Majid

2 months ago

I am going to say it.
We have a coward mc, a very stupid story so far, i mean just riding a train.
And some people are so happy like they found a master piece from just this far ?!
90% of the story is monolog, what could be worst ?

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