Hough You May Burn to Ash - Chapter 1
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Murimhater
1 year ago
Even if the intro section would have been set up differently, which I totally would.
I would remove everything before the “unexpected” “accidents”, but show the death of everybody (not just the MC) instead. Leaving who’s the MC ambiguous.
In fact I would prop up several characters to look like they’re the MC, before killing them off.
In fact I would prop up several characters to look like they’re the MC, before killing them off.
You know MC is the MC just by the fact (s)he’s the only one dying by Truck-kun.
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Yes. The angel is cruel, indeed. Remember Lucifer is technically an angel. (Probably derived from Prometheus, but that’s not here nor there).
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evilzombiemonkey
2 years ago
Editor: Write a story about these guys who die and have to fight for money.
Writer: Can it be girls in guro?
Editor:No, just make the story with guys dying.
Writer:*you’ve left an opening*
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Dream chasers
Mr. Grim “Death” Reaper, God of death
3 years ago
*me sitting in the corner* mental note take another insane angel
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HeavenlyVoidDemon
3 years ago
Truck-Kun was behind schedule so he had to crush the Mc as soon as he saw him
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TNECONNI
3 years ago
Oh. I remember reading some of this. Win games, you get money. Lose, and you died painfully.
I don’t remember why they all become girls
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Subscriber
obviously not me
3 years ago
Gender bender? Okay
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