I Used to Be a Boss - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
interesting start
Cooked
This is somethin different
Good start.
OK INTERESTING THIS IS A NICE ONE
Hmmmmm El Psy Congroo
Incredible. Never had I truly read prologue these days.
hey the last bit of the prayer is wrong its in heaven (or in the kingdom of heaven) be thy name thy will be done on earth as it is in heaven will say that they got everything else right though, source i go to a catholic school and am forced to do a morning prayer which so happens to be this one probably changed it too match the story better i honestly dont care i like this version better for this circumstance
This is very dark. Organ trafficking and murder of each other? I gotta admit, this is interesting.
Okay, I’m diggin’ it, I’m diggin’ it. 54 chapters out, let’s see how quickly I burn through them and fall into a pit of impatience and despair.
Dude first song was Novocaine By Fall Out Boy
Kickass first chapter.
I’m in. Lets go!!
I mean it’s not so different from every other concept, just more straightforward.
Every MC is Lucifer, death, demon king, necromancer
Him being baphemet is basically demon God.
They sure know how to make demonic/satanic worshipping/idolizing look cool
Awww!! I had this idea last year, and I am about halfway done writing a story exactly like this! That sucks































Okay I’m listening