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runbunnies
2 days ago
This story is compelling and interesting, but then this brat appears and destroys everything.
Leoooo
11 months ago
Guh… Ai Fa sure is a looker, but her character is somehow incomprehensible… Maybe it’s because she’s living in a survival mode all the time… She gives out some reaction in a not crucial times, but goes blank when you expect her to react…I dunno.
Dream chasers
PogFish
1 year ago
I don’t know what to say, I’m just stunlocked after reading ryuus comment down there…
TheCatLord
1 year ago
OK, ima be honest and apologies for the rant but I only do these when I feel like its necessary.
Its been 5 chapters and I still can’t get a read on this girl. She has absolutely personality until she does. If that doesn’t make sense, well that about sums up her personality. Even the kid seems to have at least a defined personality. In fact she might be the most interesting character here so far, and that’s including the main character. I think I had more of a connection with the mc’s father at the beginning than I do with most of these people. In fact so far were on chapter 5 and we’ve only interacted with about the same number of people: The dad, the mc, this girl, that dude from earlier, and this kid. We don’t even really know how long he’s been here yet do we? There’s been exposition but no actual development of the world, despite the fact that we see people in the background the village seems mostly devoid of life, and to top it off there’s been no real character development in the slightest. I get that this is a cooking manga, but cooking mangas still have stories and characters, even the bad ones. If you can’t add these elements to your story then all you’re making is a cookbook, with descriptions on how the writer got their ingredients. Maybe it gets better later on down the road but it really needs that hook to keep people invested. Without it I can guarantee that at least half of the people who started this dropped it by now. Ima go as far as I can but if it doesn’t improve Im gonna drop it.
This story is compelling and interesting, but then this brat appears and destroys everything.
Guh… Ai Fa sure is a looker, but her character is somehow incomprehensible… Maybe it’s because she’s living in a survival mode all the time… She gives out some reaction in a not crucial times, but goes blank when you expect her to react…I dunno.
I don’t know what to say, I’m just stunlocked after reading ryuus comment down there…
OK, ima be honest and apologies for the rant but I only do these when I feel like its necessary.
Its been 5 chapters and I still can’t get a read on this girl. She has absolutely personality until she does. If that doesn’t make sense, well that about sums up her personality. Even the kid seems to have at least a defined personality. In fact she might be the most interesting character here so far, and that’s including the main character. I think I had more of a connection with the mc’s father at the beginning than I do with most of these people. In fact so far were on chapter 5 and we’ve only interacted with about the same number of people: The dad, the mc, this girl, that dude from earlier, and this kid. We don’t even really know how long he’s been here yet do we? There’s been exposition but no actual development of the world, despite the fact that we see people in the background the village seems mostly devoid of life, and to top it off there’s been no real character development in the slightest. I get that this is a cooking manga, but cooking mangas still have stories and characters, even the bad ones. If you can’t add these elements to your story then all you’re making is a cookbook, with descriptions on how the writer got their ingredients. Maybe it gets better later on down the road but it really needs that hook to keep people invested. Without it I can guarantee that at least half of the people who started this dropped it by now. Ima go as far as I can but if it doesn’t improve Im gonna drop it.
what
calm down dog
Also not cum it’scum
Dude if you’re horny go to a porn site not here
What. The. Fuck….