Paranoid Mage - Chapter 103
Comments for chapter "Chapter 103"
L,why couldnt they just have sniped him in the head
I’ve really enjoyed this story so far, but I don’t feel sympathy for any of the characters. Honestly, it was almost inevitable. That plot point feels artificially forced. I can’t understand how anyone thought this was a good decision for the story. It’s really distracting. Everyone’s been quite logical until now, and suddenly they’re acting irrationally. Ohhh well…
Great, due to incompetence of the author he sacrificed liked character and turned her into self-centere, annoying, stupid b*tch that everyone hates.
And suddenly everyone is a complete idiot, because it’s necessary for the author to justify a bunch of weaksauce writing.
OK, I’m going to say this Lucy has officially got on my nerves now. Clearly she didn’t learn from how she should check her ego, especially since after that whole not securing the gold that she got the payment for him, which led to gar was able to finally tag her as a suspect. And the ghost had to come and rescue her because of her cockiness. Now she at their wedding is talking shit so much garbage about him, taking it easy and to relax when you know, all too well that he is a wanted man and all the chaos that he caused. He was being extra cautious for reason for every good reason. Now she got herself kidnapped and the ghost has to go and save her for the second time. I’m annoyed with her character and I strongly believe that it’s a possibility she may end up turning into a vampire because of this. This is the chapter that has got me annoyed out of all of them. I think the ghost should’ve went with the shifter girl that he met early in the chapter in instead of Lucy, the computer expert. Well, that’s my opinion.
HOW DID HE NOT SENSE THE PADS, THATS CRAZY. IF LUCY DIES, WHATS LEFT OF GAR DIES AND ALL THE VAMP WILL CEASE TO EXIST
if she does die though, I wonder if he will just give up on the world and kill everyone, he deems responsible?
I’m surprised he failed to detect the teleport pad. That’s his turf and he is a talented one, so why? It wasn’t hidden like he hid his anchor in the fae hunt, it should be visible to his magical sensing sphere, but he was too focused on his normal senses (a stupid thing to do with all those shifters around).
she deserves to die, the literal world is hunting him, the Secret magic society, vampires, fae, and lucy believes theres no possible way anyone would be able to find or attack them????? she did everything she could to make sure she got kidnapped.
Really dedicated the chapter to just making her look stupid
Callin it, they’re gonna turn her into a vampire, resolving the “I’m dead weight” issue and the “I’m mortal so you’ll outlive me” issue at the same time.
“why can’t you relax on our wedding?” I dunno babe, cause I’m an assassin and wanted by half the supernatural world?
“I just want a happy completely defenseless wedding”
… why are women like this. she’s lucky they’re not both dead
yeah, everything is logical, even Lucy’s being a woman at critical time. But it still feels icky somehow. Can someone explain how I should take this forced progression? :/