Red storm - Chapter 120
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flamesting
1 year ago
This is getting annoying
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lunarI4CEs
1 year ago
it’s like, reality itself doesn’t want Yulian to know every truth. Intervention every time. And us, the readers are watching everything from Yulian’s perspective. So what he doesn’t know, we don’t know that either. Clever move, author-nim. I like it
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I think that keeping the main plot a secret is not a problem in itself, in lots of story, it makes sense for the main character to discover the hidden schemes and the inner workings of the world as the story progress. But the problem here and it’s certainly because it’s one of the author first work, is that it’s not subtle at all, the reader is not figuring out the secrets of the world by himself. We just have higher level characters that know of the plot but tells us that it’s too early to know about it when the author could have just let the plot unfold by itself.