Shinka no Mi - Chapter 2
Comments for chapter "Chapter 2"
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6 comments
3 years ago
I FOUND TREASURE, THIS IS GREAT, I’M ALREADY HAVING FUN AND THIS IS JUST CHAPTER 2 YET
3 years ago
I feel like chapter one and two needs to be reorganized. The beginning spoiled who this was and it was kinda pointless to start us up part of the way in if they were just going to explain how he got here on the first few pages of the next chapter. If they had held off on the explanation a bit longer and given us no peaks into the future this opening would have been much better.
4 years ago
im guessing this is an SSSSS rank dungeon or something. Also i think mc is gonna be in here for quite a while before getting out
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