Star-Embracing Swordmaster - Chapter 6
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Jesus
3 months ago
Ok I see.. so he became better at handling the sword. And also many seems to be aware of what is the sword path or whatever that is.. I suppose it is a path with someone can become a swordmaster or something. So far so good.
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Arts
1 year ago
Jager was jealous, because nobody has the “move” like him.
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ObeyTheHeart
2 years ago
‘count ya days buddy
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vanlinder
2 years ago
ah yes he can kill giant troll after 1 months of joining very convenient indeed
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demon slayer
2 years ago
of course he is
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Mad Jesus
2 years ago
He have a cheat. Cheat doesn’t equal genius. Unless you’re the genius who created the cheat. Or the cheater who cheated the genius who created the cheat.
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Penguin
2 years ago
blud learning from his schizos
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What sets this story apart from so much other slop online is that this series actually has a Hero’s Journey. Vlad doesn’t start the story as an overpowered superman, or even as a lucky “genius” who conquers every obstacle without breaking a sweat. He struggles, he fails, he has setbacks and injuries. He has flaws and makes many mistakes. THAT is how you write a compelling, relatable character! I have gotten so sick of the self-insert power fantasy that seems to infect so many authors. Give us a hero that actually has a personality! Hail Vlad of Shoara! The Sword of the North! The STARFORGED!