The Demon King of the Frontier Life, Reincarnated to Become the Strongest MageT - Chapter 12
Comments for chapter "Chapter 12"
im out, its not for me, its kinda poorly written.
I find myself… a little disappointed in Zeros’ resolution. (That is the brother’s name, right?) He clearly has a lot to unpack and have cleared up after this scenario… but the story is essentially having him ‘exit stage left’. The kid is still very talented, even if not on the grade of the protagonist. I’d have liked it if he also tagged along to the school and allow his arc to continue and/or finish more satisfactory.
We met the crossroads of plots there. It’s either escape and become an adventurer or School Arc. School arc is better I guess
MC is going to be like his father. Queen is the primary wife, and maid is the mother of his illegitimate children.
He played his entire hand.
up until now a super manga,
but i don’t like how this ark ended and everything just goes the typical happy innocent child-like way and the brother and co stand up for him even though he didn’t ask (quite the opposite).
That is either totally unrealistic and just done to push the Story in a certain direction, after wandering to far off/going in the wrong direction,
or its an attempt at making a comedic part which in itself isn’t a bad try but it totally doesn’t fit in the Story.
And the Story from here on doesn’t transition very well to the second ark, which i think is to much of a directional change.
5.5/10 good till now.
mc got power but no authority,,,,this is make me jelly