The Eldest Son of the Marquis House is a Martial Artist - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
sexy meh? he looks kinda ugly ngl
Yea, sorry, not for me. Some of you might prefer this, but not me. I hate awkward moments/slip-ups in the beginning chapters where the MC acts all goofy & ret*rded.
“Ah, a beauty?!” “Wha– A system? Hey, do you see this???”
It’s fine to add a bit of comedy here & there, but too much turns the whole thing into a joke that’s hard to “relate” — put myself in the MC’s shoes — to.
A mature, stoic, & an analytical main character is my preference. They don’t need to be a reincarnated Martial God or Demon King, just… competent.
Anyway, I’m rambling. I had to skip most of the chapter because I knew how cringe it’d be.
(. . . I’m still gonna read it . . .)
I thought it this was different one, due to a novel I read with a similar thing going on. the novel premise goes like this spoilers ahead
A dullahan as in a headless horseman. Durian on the other hand is a fruit that smells like rotting sewage. Why do people eat that stuff?
morbidly obese, system is being kind there
I dare anyone to call their parents by their first name.




































also kinda stupid right what sort of kid calls their parent’s name? he deserved that smack