The Hero Returns - Chapter 162
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the writing and/or pacing needs a bit of improvement. the prince is saying there’s a destroyer out for their world so he’s abandoning humanity to end it. meanwhile MC is saying his way is right but he literally spent how many years slowly getting stronger while the prince has a limited time. also, it doesn’t matter if MC had a different flow of time in that other zone, that’s still not available to the prince.
the other piece of improvement is it didn’t feel like the prince gave up “that much” of his humanity, it doesn’t really show him grappling with it, maybe having made decisions like sacrificing some for the sake of the rest. it doesn’t feel like he should be that strong yet here’s the MC saying he’s beat with just raw power levels alone. the prince is also just using aura power to fight while MC has used two tools already – the cloud and fan. it’s not a very convincing argument.