The Magic Genius of the Marquis - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
Chapter 1 has bad pacing and too many tropes crammed into it. I will say that the story in future chapters gets pretty good so it is worth sticking around.
Ahhhhh Cliche, Btw mc is cute but still cliche
So like cancer from the day you were born.
well that was a let down, I was thinking that maybe he would have started looking for someone who knew of the cure and thus go on a adventure or perhaps he would push himself enough to eventually overcome his limitations but instead he instantly overcame his limitations.
I get the feeling this is going to be extremely boring.
So he got rid if his limitation in chap1? 
Goofy
why is it always adolf
bro is a child and still an alcoholic (in his stats…lol)
Usually I’m fine with this type of plot but this one is just unappealing to me for some reasons
I’m sorry, ALCOHOLIC?!
Tbf, it sounded like the kid was counting his days hopelessly trying not to die while no one cared to help💀
So dumb.. Calling some ten year old incompetent and powerless, like its an insult. Ofc he’s incompetent and powerless, he’s TEN. Also makes sense he has a bad personality, I would too if I had an absentee father, a dead mother, and disease that slowly kills me over time, not to mention, IM TEN. Did they expect a ten year old with no supportive family to be able to handle a deadly disease maturely? Also the “insight skill” window says, “alcoholic”. Wtf? Wdym alcoholic? He’s a kid, where’d he get alcohol from? Not to mention he already doesn’t get enough nutrients necessary for life because of the disease, if he was an alcoholic he’d be dead by now, and he’s TEN! How’d he become an alcoholic at TEN YEARS OLD?! 😭💀😬
a yes a 13 year old alcoholic the best of the best
What’s the point in portraying him as a useless character if he’s immediately given something to counteract his sickness & lack of talent.
13…alcoholic…this kid is not a monkey