The Player that can't Level Up - Chapter 12
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Demon Hunters
the insane teenager
2 years ago
why did the conversation have to be while they are taking showers?
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Unholy clan
Chitownflex
2 years ago
Ooooo development
and mc is lowkey ripped asf
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There are times when a flashback is useful. There wasn’t any appropriate use for the flashback in this chapter. Just tell the story without useless flashbacks.