The Transmigrated Mage Life in Another World, Becoming the Strongest in the World with the Knowledge of the Original Story - Chapter 5
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I’m going to go out on a limb and say that now that he’s contracted to use wind magic this statement will no longer be true for the rest of the story.
yess lets go 
piece of advice for writers though. In a scene like this, don’t make the flame knife like this. You cant just give it all these abilities. Either you explain what the knife can do and show how mc got it, or you make it simple. You cant have a knife that can shoot m fire, imbue fire to the blade and apparently make chains of flame, that’s like a completely different ability.
PLOT ARMOR — to the rescue!!!
and random stuff he piulls out with no back story or explanation
BAM a flame chain comes outta nowhere, among other things—-
story needs a lot of work .
So the side character has that weird names huh… Will, Shall… What’s next? Could and Might? Would and Still? May or Perhaps?
Lots of plot holes here. The MC is an author, how does he know fighting techniques and acrobatics and on top of that how is he so comfortable fighting as if he has tons of experience? This makes literally no sense. It could have been easily fixed too, could have had the Will character have combat training and experience or something that the MC gained when he transmigrated. That’s just one example that I pulled outta my butt. author doesn’t even try.
So that’s gonna be the excuse for everything then, that he’s the writer? It works, but you can’t deny that it is a bit lazy
Does the MC plan on becoming the avatar?
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“Only beings higher than the spirit itself can understand its language”
Welp, Author is the highest power in existence, so of course he can