The Twin Siblings’ New Life - Chapter 54
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3 years ago
at this point its not even onions anymore its pepper spray
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3 years ago
I must just start a flash flood of tears at this rate
3 years ago
I don’t think I’ve ever been so badly heated by onion ninjas while reading a story before 
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3 years ago
Onion cutting ninjas did a drive by on me
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Again, “Reincarnation Ruins the Moment”
This is no doubt an emotional scene, and I’d feel a lot more from it if the reincarnation element wasn’t holding it back. I can’t bring myself to feel nearly as bad for them because they’re not fully children despite being written like them.
Imagine how impactful this would be if they cut out the reincarnation plot and they were just children. Children being thrown into this mass of emotion and pain finally breaking down after one of the most stressful moments in their life.