Yajin Tensei: Karate Survivor in Another World - Chapter 45
Comments for chapter "Chapter 45"
Ok tf is goin on? Lvl 25 fisherman and mc seems to struggle against normal people while he supposedly got stronger?
Tf a fisherman stronker than adventurer and guard?
How a fking fisherman got lvl 25?
what a BS chapter didn’t he have a sense skill LOL
let’s give this two or more then if still written by an AMATEUR author we can easily drop this
I feel like MC gets weaker the longer this BS goes on, did he just get robbed by a bunch of fishermen? with his sense skill?
His a dumb ass
What level even is MC we know he got over 15 and then it just never brought it back up
Worst writing so far. Having cautious fisherman uncle boss be lvl 25 is just dumb. Even lvl 15 would be a stretch.
bro brainwashed buddy xD
My two cents on this chapter (which was ultimately good imo)
(copy pasted my own comment) –
Tl;Dr – Badly served scene. The writing COULD have made sense if the author focused on the chase.
Elaboration:
Umm I agree but I’ll give it a pass. Our MC can’t be the strongest, fastest, smartest. Here he admitted he lost them due distance and not being familiar with the area- Which makes lots of sense. Even if he could feel them from a distance he probably wouldn’t approach them anyways unless he went berserk. He’s very calculative and uses stealth and martial arts after all. Plus, again, feel him up all you want (lol) but if he’s too fast, he’s simply too fast. (especially if he knows shortcuts and such).
Ultimately, it makes sense someone is simply faster than him. It’s definitely something you don’t have to like too, but I think the way the author served the scene is what ruined it. We didn’t get to see the chase so losing track of him feels “un-earned” in the writing sense- No weight for the scene. Show Don’t Tell is important in such high quality stories such as this.
How are any of these bastards alive ?! And MC invested a lot of time in tracking skills, but he can’t track one singular asshole three feet away ? (And we established he can track through walls since he could spot wolves within their cave)
I have a terrible feeling about that poor dragon. However if he is not human i also have a feeling that he is about to break a threshold…
assassins creed type shit, the fact I only now thought of that
Lets go. The plot is developing





































did… did Author forgot that he wrote mc with “presence detection” ? that can see through obstacles hundred meters away??