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Chrome
13 days ago
What level even is MC we know he got over 15 and then it just never brought it back up
likenew
1 month ago
Worst writing so far. Having cautious fisherman uncle boss be lvl 25 is just dumb. Even lvl 15 would be a stretch.
Light of Hope
[Constallation of the savior]
3 months ago
bro brainwashed buddy xD
AgentK300
3 months ago
My two cents on this chapter (which was ultimately good imo)
(copy pasted my own comment) –
Tl;Dr – Badly served scene. The writing COULD have made sense if the author focused on the chase.
Elaboration:
Umm I agree but I’ll give it a pass. Our MC can’t be the strongest, fastest, smartest. Here he admitted he lost them due distance and not being familiar with the area- Which makes lots of sense. Even if he could feel them from a distance he probably wouldn’t approach them anyways unless he went berserk. He’s very calculative and uses stealth and martial arts after all. Plus, again, feel him up all you want (lol) but if he’s too fast, he’s simply too fast. (especially if he knows shortcuts and such).
Ultimately, it makes sense someone is simply faster than him. It’s definitely something you don’t have to like too, but I think the way the author served the scene is what ruined it. We didn’t get to see the chase so losing track of him feels “un-earned” in the writing sense- No weight for the scene. Show Don’t Tell is important in such high quality stories such as this.
Karboom
5 months ago
How are any of these bastards alive ?! And MC invested a lot of time in tracking skills, but he can’t track one singular asshole three feet away ? (And we established he can track through walls since he could spot wolves within their cave)
Trolls
senpaithatfriendzonesyou
5 months ago
I have a terrible feeling about that poor dragon. However if he is not human i also have a feeling that he is about to break a threshold…
Trilapel
5 months ago
assassins creed type shit, the fact I only now thought of that
ArmouredHades
5 months ago
Lets go. The plot is developing
BuluHidung
5 months ago
the plot become more weird
D
Irritating Squad
Gurr
5 months ago
So people that kill monsters as their job have problems getting past lvl 15 and here we have your average fisherman lvl 25? And how is it MC lost man that was an arm length from him? Is it that hard for a trained fit man to jump though a window?
What level even is MC we know he got over 15 and then it just never brought it back up
Worst writing so far. Having cautious fisherman uncle boss be lvl 25 is just dumb. Even lvl 15 would be a stretch.
bro brainwashed buddy xD
My two cents on this chapter (which was ultimately good imo)
(copy pasted my own comment) –
Tl;Dr – Badly served scene. The writing COULD have made sense if the author focused on the chase.
Elaboration:
Umm I agree but I’ll give it a pass. Our MC can’t be the strongest, fastest, smartest. Here he admitted he lost them due distance and not being familiar with the area- Which makes lots of sense. Even if he could feel them from a distance he probably wouldn’t approach them anyways unless he went berserk. He’s very calculative and uses stealth and martial arts after all. Plus, again, feel him up all you want (lol) but if he’s too fast, he’s simply too fast. (especially if he knows shortcuts and such).
Ultimately, it makes sense someone is simply faster than him. It’s definitely something you don’t have to like too, but I think the way the author served the scene is what ruined it. We didn’t get to see the chase so losing track of him feels “un-earned” in the writing sense- No weight for the scene. Show Don’t Tell is important in such high quality stories such as this.
How are any of these bastards alive ?! And MC invested a lot of time in tracking skills, but he can’t track one singular asshole three feet away ? (And we established he can track through walls since he could spot wolves within their cave)
I have a terrible feeling about that poor dragon. However if he is not human i also have a feeling that he is about to break a threshold…
assassins creed type shit, the fact I only now thought of that
Lets go. The plot is developing
the plot become more weird
So people that kill monsters as their job have problems getting past lvl 15 and here we have your average fisherman lvl 25? And how is it MC lost man that was an arm length from him? Is it that hard for a trained fit man to jump though a window?
The Demon of Great Bath has awoken!