Memoir Of The King Of War - Chapter 170
Comments for chapter "Chapter 170"
The build up is important to the story so I guess this is fine ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Are we gonna hear the thoughts of every single person present in this assembly?
Come on, that’s way too much talk now. We want action!
Yeah, I am gonna let his pile up for about 2-3 months before reading because it’s getting ridiculous at this point. I understand the world building but his is just way too much exposition.
Next Chapter the MC gets 10 panels about moving his right foot ahead of his left while pondering about a spider web in the corner of the room. The oddly Drawn guy will contort his face in a more acute angle, and everyone will gloat about something they did a few chapters ago.
bruh lemme guess,we need to wait 10 more chapters?
Then just do it
Hurry it up lol
1 chapter is dragged into 10 chapters with too much talking…tf .author read this yourself from readers point of view. Annoying AF