My Noble Family is Headed For Ruin, So I May As Well Study Magic In My Free Time - Chapter 15

this manga really wants to move as fast as possible in the story but wants to make the mc stronger but it also really wants to explain itself every step of the way making a random jumble of nonsense at times explaining why this has happened and sometime repeating itself for no reason

example the water spirit asks to get upgraded so she can posses things he dose it then she state she gotten stronger and can now posses things she said she would be able to do that before so why would she state it again for no reason

by wanting the mc to get stronger but while moving the story along so fast you have made a pile of trash mc goes here finds something gets stronger oh what’s this next chapter he dose the same dame thing while pushing the story so fast it seems you have forgot what makes most people keep reading take this for example you have a bunch of thugs to show up who try to take and elf/fairy so tee mc has to save them then in a later chapter what’s this a group of thugs so you have the previous elf/fairy beat the to show how mush stronger she is now
did you think that it would have been interesting or funny to the reader because it wasn’t i found it hard to read because it was so forced and stupid
while were here what the hell is up with making the fairy’s into elves it made no sense
the werewolves looked more human but still had characteristics from before but you just striate up changed the fairy’s race you would normally explain why but you just didn’t leading to more confusion

if you slow down the story progression you could make a really good manga but with how your going about it right now it will be bad like why would I read this in my free time when there are better options I had a hard time not trying to skim through this what happened you were doing great at the start

omg this is a long ramble