Paranoid Mage - Chapter 11
Comments for chapter "Chapter 11"
This is the best moment to play “Pumped Up Kicks” by Foster by People 
Being resistant is fine, but I guess it would be helpful to know what exactly other party tried to do – how they meant to look like, etc. Otherwise it’s hard to play along feigning being affected.
One day mc gonna say no one will notice if there is no one to notice
Bets thing he could of done, was pretended to be enchanted. Him showing he wasn’t enchanted, is the same as showing he had Magic. He should of also reacted differently when they mentioned vampires, like laughing at them or such.
I think he should have just let himself get enchanted by her…
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“Person of interest” is such a BS term overused and misused by law and media
The MC should just kill them but he’s too soft if l were him l would kill them but lucky thing thing for that world is l am not him otherwise
Bro tried to be as suspicious as possible
They’re just gonna flash their GAR badges? Still don’t understand if GAR is public knowledge or not.
first thing im doing is leaving in a small off the grid plane at 3am to madagascar
lots of text missing
Jumpscare
just thinking he could hide the stuff underground. look for a deep enough spot, hollow it out with space magic and put all the vampire loot there no obvious physical entrance so unless they use their perception to search deep underground. he can even use it to hide in cases of emergencies because even if he teleports right in front ;f them, the most likely going scan every direction except deep below ground.
“Mundane” instead of “Mudblood” 🤣👌
Now MC can’t just leave this place, it’s one thing to Piss of G.A.R., it’s another to piss off the Vampire’s. MC needs the Wolves help. Also, how were they easily able to find MC? And, aside from Felicia, we know nothing about this guy’s magic.
in a few chapters, im hoping MC can portal anyone into the sun at any time.