Paranoid Mage - Chapter 42
Comments for chapter "Chapter 42"
This story has a lot of good but also a lot of plotholes and conveniences, c’mon author it should have been easy enough to make mc do couple mistakes that keeps gar on his tracks instead of just “because”
All these random leaps that point everything to the MC, and yet, they don’t make the random leap that he’s working alone? I swear, this writing is so rudimentary that it feels like a first draft from a 2nd grader.
I find it believable, though not what the character said “a hunch.” She does freelance for the alpha dude, and that same alpha dude was also suspect of attacking the vampires using Callum. Though, I would rather have the author say that than just a plain “hunch.”
Shame this was a bad writing hunch, whatever was from the novel sounded better
After all that and the writer has them keep an eye on her for a “hunch”. Her specifically.
BRUH, AUTHOR IS GIVING THESE SHIZ HEAD PLOT ARMOR AGAINST THE MAIN CHARACTERS.
HE KNOWS THAT THE MAIN CHARACTERS HE CREATED IS TOO GOOD.
That fish women ask 3 times one question with anger the last time and then get the answer and then say i am not interested of your private affaires. Like why the heck you ask the question then ? How should anyone answer to that in the other way around ?
Also when MC went to Europe the organizations didn’t know that the mc was going for the portals and then instantly knew it was for the portals.
If feels like there is like 10 people in the world as they have hunches and so on. Like they dont have other rogue mages hiding and so on or some who are trough the portals like in the vamp world that was basically full of earth mages and yeah some patrol felt magic in the air and all instantly think that must be the mc for reasons even tough city is full of mages and all their organizations people are messed up criminals who are all tolerated to do crime but mc is for some reason more special. Cant catch him but know where he goes instantly all the time
Ugh the writing is kinda slipping what do you mean a hunch💀
hunch ? i’d call that plot convenience
call it plot
Okay in the novel, it’s a vampire that interrogated her first, and they have such a long list of employees the interrogator is intentionally lazy and also cruel, compelling her to sit still and not move for hours, which leads to her whole body being locked still and muscles cramping up. Then, later, they have the US government (mundanes) send specialists, who tell GAR that they were lazy and Lucy is a good lead. Then they tap her phone and computer and find she’s working with callum. So, no, not lazy writing in the story, lazy writing in the comic.
Anyone with experience interrogating would notice the answers that were intentionally vague. The Fae girl would know the limits of her own power and should notice immediately when someone starts being vague. Bad writing here.
That’s some lazy writing.
Hands off pal, she is big bros girl
If that garbage violet b!tch doesn’t die ASAP I swear I will curse the writer and his whole lineage for eternity.