The Beast Tamer Who Got Kicked Out From the Hero Party, Meets a Cat Girl From the Superior Race - Chapter 4
Comments for chapter "Chapter 4"
I ain’t gonna read that.
Ok, contracts are at least partly explained. But question… Does the Catgirl get anything out of the arrangement?
You should write these things. You already have a checklist and everything.
Honestly, though, I feel like you’d do pretty well. You have a good sense of the moments that make a story fun to read.
Even if he didn’t think he could tame stronger beings why not just try???
I know a lot of people are blaming the mc for being dumb and lead by plot armor but I’d like to argue that we don’t really know how long the mc has actually trained his ability to tame. I’d also like to add that he may not have been confident enough to tame stronger monsters in order to aide himself and may have had the thought of needing to work on his skills, hence the who bit of him believing that his old party were encouraging him to do his best and believed in his potential. Also I’d like to say that him thinking the way he does is very realistic, including the doubts he has with himself. Finally I’d like to say that the mc is on the average intellect on what we should expect from an mc instead of immediately asking for an extremely over the top intellectual MC. Nit picking at the smallest things instead of seeing what he is truly capable too early is a poor judgements in my opinion.
need more paragraph breaks, the massive wall of text will turn most ppl off from reading it.
Then write the story and publish it instead of moaning about someone else’s work. Talk is cheap. 😉
See the lack of comments here? It’s because a bunch of people dropped this series after this stupid plot armor appeared.
obligatory cute monsters…………………………….cant help but LOVE THEM, c-can we keep just one pls
