The Tutorial is Too Hard - Chapter 49
Comments for chapter "Chapter 49"
this is a huge pacing issue, its fine to break up main story with side stories, bu you have to set them up, so you maintain the same pace between the story flows….
i agree with yapper below unnecessary time skips kill the vibe of story like when did he summoned them what was lizard reaction so much happened and it’s skiped
I just wanna see him clear floor 100
Alrighty, I’m putting this to the side, potentially dropping it entirely.
It was a great story in the beginning, but the author has completely flopped it. I don’t agree with the comments that find it confusing, I feel like the story is easy enough to follow, but the time skips are completely ruining the story.
They serve absolutely no narrative purpose, and is only spoiling what is gonna happen, who lives, who doesn’t, and takes away any value from reading the story. Time skipping story telling is meant to be enticing to the reader, waving a carrot on the stick that makes the reader wanna know what led to that point. But instead, it’s just jumping around and telling us what happens in an uninteresting way.
I was genuinely invested in MCs growth, and wanted to see his response to the opportunity to become an apostle, and then you just skip 5 floors and give us a short narration of what happened and his thoughts throughout it? It just seems like the author is using the time skips as a cheap tool to avoid having to actually write the story. Even if we go back to the 6th floor and see what happens, what’s the point now? There is nothing to look forward to.
And I can’t continue reading a story where I can at any point expect the story to skip forward and spoil the story and plot in the least interesting way possible, just like it did here. It was a great story, but the author completely ruined it
now I’m understanding the story a little bit.
Look at all these small brain idiots not being able to follow a simple story with time skips that enhance the story
Y’all need to grow up and use your brain or go back to kids comics
these is confusing asf!
The Last of Us 2 : Tower Edition
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Ugh! Another stupid time skip!
this is sure creative writing, time skip, remembering the old memories. but, this way may not the best, its confusing.
look at “Isekai Ojiisan”, (Isekai Uncle on Netflix)… thay way of story telling is better.
Ok I’ll let this go, but timeskip like this again, I drop this
I kinda get it
way to confusing
































Like many others i am not enjoying all the skipping around. Why make an effort to show the MCs slow growth and effort to beat 6th floor and then turn around and then say he easily beats the 11th. Unprompted. You completely killed the pacing. Still reading but i hope it cuts out this nonsense. it can flash forward to floor 60, w/e thats a lifetime away. but not to a floor thats a couple stages away i mean come on.