The Undefeatable Swordsman

1.) The brother. There’s this whole build up to the brothers living separate lives and when they meet again there’s just very little that happens before the brother is written out of the story.

2.) the grandfather. Shows up randomly and doe drive the plot into a interesting direction but gets randomly written out in a footnote later because he’s essentially too OP for the story.

3.) the blood demon. In their first encounter, they separate from the fake warrior crew because they wanted to protected them but they just ultimately gets the warriors killed for leaving them alone? In the second encounter, MC knows he’s weaker than the demon but still goes to him for no reason to just lose. And then there’s this suspense of him getting corrupted that feels egged on but anticlimactic when the MC gets saved.

4.) The Black potion. A plot device that was meant to help the mother recover from her illness is now used whenever the MC needs a boost.

5.) the MC choices. People have already pointed out that MC randomly kills people or gives them a second chance. Theres this underlying plot about him possibly growing cold because of the crimes villains do but it doesn’t really go anywhere.

6.) the martial arts. The MC uses new techniques out of nowhere often. It feels like only technique that had proper buildup was his mirage steps. His wind power was pretty abrupt. Everything else comes and goes as the author needs.