99 BOSS

90% random npc side character plotlines, 10% of actual fighting. Of that 10% of fighting only 2% is of the MC fighting, the mc seems to only be intimidating, and that’s about all. I think it has a lot of potential but they’re ruining by focusing on shit side characters with horrible writing, i’d love them to focus more on the main character who i’m assuming is the tall, fat/muscular guy, however It is seriously a red flag if I need to question who the mc is and is not, I should know, the first chapter was spent entirely on people that frankly don’t matter, this is not a good look as a first chapter should be about getting us into the story. Overall the potential is high but the execution is average, or even below average, I can see it getting much, much better if they focus on a single character instead of 30+. Or perhaps the main character and people around him.I love MC’s that are tall and massive, since it breaks both normal conventions and is badass, hope they go with it since at the moment they don’t seem do have a structure.