Avalon of Disaster

After reading 31 chapters, I find that its a pretty good storyline. It is simple, easy to follow and has plenty of potential but for some reason the writer has slowed the story down in places that give it the impression of boring. Add on top of that a mc that whinges and whines for the first 20 chapters or so, really start to make you scream out to just get the f*** going. Not only that the mc is forgetting four things. The first is he is trying to keep a non-interference to his story but he does not realise that even the act of observing an event can change the outcome of an event (this is due to nerves of being observed, them trying to hide abilities, him being there means they will do different attacks to either deliberately try and hit him or miss him, etc). The second, he is trying to change the future even by changing others and himself while he is trying to conceal it all! The third thing is someone is screwing around anyway, so they are doing things that will stuff things up as well. Lastly the fourth is he is working from the worst position and going upward, not from an over powered position and working downward, which is starting any game in extreme bloody nightmare mode. But as I said this manga has potential and will book mark it to see if they get better, otherwise this manga will be done and collapse.

The mangaka is doing each chapter at the pace of the LN, so the chapters are gonna be short

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