Break Through In Another World With Magical Eyes And Bullets!!

After reading 18 chapters, what can I say but OMFG. How could you get it so bad? Even following the generic line of over powered guns in fantasy, all the classic troupes of this setting and you still make it come out bad, even though it should at lest come out a good, casual and pleasant read! So the warnings: if you are OCD in any way, skip this manga. It makes mistake, after mistake, after mistake, in every chapter and half a dozen in the first 5 of them each. If you get TRIGGERED by slavery then also skip this manga and for crying out loud, do not go running your diatribe off, just makes you sound completely stupid! Also what ever you do, do not use common sense for this manga. It is a magical gun, in a fantasy world, with magical bullets and everyone (apart from those that need to be nasty), seem to be on some good substances (especially most people that have not even met the mc and party before)! The artwork: is normally clear and cleanly drawn. But it seems there is a different drawer for every frame and cant seem to keep the picture flowing from one page to the next, from one chapter to the next. Translation: I can say that it seems to follow the same as the artwork (wouldn’t be surprised if they where the same, did not check). Names get changed, sentence flow is disjointed (dyslexic in places) and does not add any favours to the manga. Story line and flow: It often has flashbacks (thankfully they are short), jumps around so much (do not be surprised if you think the mc has teleport), when you get to the big fight you will scream for joy not from the suspense but cause it finally got there and it get very dialogue heavy in places that is very noticeable it jars the flow. I will book mark this not cause it was a good read but cause I actually hope the writer, artist and translator can all come together to see if they can at lest become a good manga.